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Check the following English spelling and grammar, tense errors and point out: The study’s research protocol has undergone scrutiny and received approval from the local Institutional Review Board. All expectant mothers furnished written informed co...

In the first paragraph, there are no errors found.

In the second paragraph, there is one error:

  • “Following analysis, six participants were excluded due to substandard image quality,” should be in past tense: “After analysis, six participants were excluded due to substandard image quality.”

In the third paragraph, there are a few errors:

  • “These subjects” should be replaced with “The participants”.
  • The sentence “We conducted T2-weighted magnetic resonance imaging on these 74 patients (37 in the control group and 37 in the IVM group; with gestational ages spanning from 26 to 35 weeks)” should start with a lowercase letter “w”.
  • The phrase “fetal control group comprised instances of suspected fetal brain anomalies detected via ultrasound” needs to be rephrased for clarity. One possible revision could be: “The fetal control group included cases where ultrasound had raised suspicions of fetal brain anomalies, but none were visible on MRI.”
  • The sentence “A pediatric neuroradiologist, possessing over 15 years of expertise, examined all MRI images to corroborate the diagnosis” should use a different word than “corroborate”. Perhaps a better word would be “confirm”.

In the fourth paragraph, there are no errors found.

In the fifth paragraph, there is one error:

  • The sentence “Evaluate five domains: adaptability…” should start with an uppercase letter since it is a continuation of a previous sentence.

In the sixth paragraph, there are no errors found.

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