修改以下英文邮箱，用词更商务更官方。Dear Mr. Dang Thai Son: First of all, the Administrative Committee of Xiamen Gulangyu-Wanshishan Scenic Area is very pleased to invite you to participate in The 12th Gulangyu Piano Arts Week & Gulangyu Youth Piano Competition an-Go服务器开发

Dear Mr. Dang Thai Son,

We are delighted to extend an invitation on behalf of the Administrative Committee of Xiamen Gulangyu-Wanshishan Scenic Area to participate in The 12th Gulangyu Piano Arts Week & Gulangyu Youth Piano Competition as a distinguished judge. Your reputation for professionalism, outstanding musicianship and rich experience makes you a valuable asset in ensuring the high quality judging that this competition demands.

Gulangyu is recognized as a World Heritage Site and famously known as the “Island of Music”. We believe that your participation will contribute significantly towards promoting young piano lovers’ talents and abilities.

This letter serves to inform you about the details regarding your itinerary as a jury member for the Gulangyu Youth Piano Competition. The event will take place in Gulangyu, Xiamen, China from 28 September to 5 October 2023. We kindly invite you to participate in both the Gulangyu Youth Piano Final Judging and Public Service Masterclass scheduled from 1 to 5 October and 29 September respectively.

To facilitate visa processing, we request that you provide us with your photo ID by 26 June at kulangsupaw@163.com. Our team will make all necessary arrangements for your itinerary and accommodation once you arrive in Gulangyu.

We appreciate your support immensely, and if any aspect of our arrangement is unsuitable, please do not hesitate to contact us so that we may make necessary adjustments promptly for your convenience.

Enclosed herewith is the official invitation along with published regulations for the 2023 Gulangyu Youth Piano Competition.

We look forward to receiving your favorable response soonest possible.

Best regards,

Gulangyu Youth Piano Competition Organizing Committee Lin Yan